Sorry for the long wait guys, I got kinda busy.
Here’s another rough draft for you. As you can see, I’m getting a much better feel for my characters but this is still very rough for me. 2,091 more words
When the small creatures hush their singing, said Adam One, it’s because they’re afraid. You must listen for the sound of their fear.
You must inhale the smell of their fear.939 more words
So the boy went to the end of the hills, where the man with all his black suit lives. He took his steps slowly, his breath is well-ordered, his face was so calm. 709 more words