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Chapter 12 is done!
I’ve finished another short story in between Chapter 11 and this chapter… which was quite a bit of time. Either way, I’m not doing so badly. This chapter I don’t know if I like… more →
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Chapter 12 is done!
Garrick wrote 1 year ago: I’ve finished another short story in between Chapter 11 and this chapter… which was quit … more →
Chapter Eleven is DONE!
Garrick wrote 1 year ago: I think that’s a new record, I swear! 2 days! Go me. Hopefully I can keep this pace. *of cours … more →
Hah! Not long after Chapter Nine, either!
Garrick wrote 1 year ago: This is Chapter 10. I enjoyed writing it, so… well, if the past is anything to go off of, it w … more →
And, finally, after a long respite... Here's Chapter 9!
Garrick wrote 1 year ago: I won’t slow you all down with some unneeded talk. I’ll send you all right into the chap … more →
Well, this chapter was fun.
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Garrick wrote 1 year ago: I definitely liked this chapter, writing, and designing. This’ll show that the story’s n … more →
I don't think...
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Garrick wrote 1 year ago: I’ve written a chapter like this ever. So, sorry if it sucks really bad. I really tried hard t … more →
And, the end of the relative part Ones for both drafts...
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Garrick wrote 1 year ago: As I said, the chapter Four of Draft One is around the same as the Chapter Six of Draft two. When yo … more →
These chapters, Chapter Four and Five...
Garrick wrote 1 year ago: Really have no equivalent int he First Draft. Because the transition in the first draft (only four c … more →
I love how my storyline makes SO much more sense...
Garrick wrote 1 year ago: In the second draft. If you compare the first few chapters of each draft… you can tell. Anyhow … more →
Continuing on... Here's the second chapter of the second draft.
Garrick wrote 1 year ago: Here’s the second chapter of the second draft… And in regards to the first draft… … more →
And, for comparison, the first chapter of my second draft...
Garrick wrote 1 year ago: This is the first chapter of my second draft of my story “Merry-go-Round”. As compared t … more →
