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"…the governments would revert to equality…"2 comments

RAB wrote 1 week ago: My prolonged lack of new posts is the result of several newsletters, a stage production, and a mount … more →

Tags: Clear Thinking, Education, faulty reasoning, Humor, Student Writing, Your guess is as good as mine, communism, greed, social classes

"He went to Amsterdam, in the Neverlands."4 comments

RAB wrote 1 month ago: I post this in celebration of my dear friend David Chacko (also a fine writer, by the way! check him … more →

Tags: Education, Humor, inaccurate hearing, Student Writing, lowlands, Netherlands, Peter Pan

"With the research of the history I will know about the other countries and how they were before I got there."5 comments

RAB wrote 1 month ago: This is another student who believes that most of what we know of life began more or less with his b … more →

Tags: Student Writing, Clear Thinking, Education, Humor

"Many people who either live or do not live in the Bronx believe…"6 comments

RAB wrote 2 months ago: Do we even care what they believe, this particular population? I don’t remember, anyway. I wro … more →

Tags: Student Writing, Clear Thinking, Phrasing, Humor, New York City, The Bronx, five boroughs

"If everyone works together, change may be able to come."4 comments

RAB wrote 3 months ago: I’ve written before about the world of students, where agency is either up for grabs or strang … more →

Tags: Clear Thinking, Education, Humor, Just plain wrong, Phrasing, Student Writing, agency

"Women in general always make things an issue…"5 comments

RAB wrote 3 months ago: You can feel it coming, can’t you? A student sentence that begins “Women…” never b … more →

Tags: Student Writing, Clear Thinking, Education, overgeneralization, Humor, difference between men and women, Maurice Chevalier

"As a parent he clearly does not want to watch his son dig his own grave."2 comments

RAB wrote 3 months ago: Well, this is figurative language, or ought to be. Someone knowingly behaving badly, making unhealth … more →

Tags: Student Writing, Education, Figure of Speech, literary understanding, Humor, Figurative Language

"Last month a man turned himself into a fire station…"6 comments

RAB wrote 4 months ago: This seems like a practical kind of man to have around town, although he didn’t start out all … more →

Tags: great typo, Humor, inaccurate hearing, Phrasing

"Most kids want to immolate their role model."3 comments

RAB wrote 4 months ago: Would mentioning Lance Armstrong in this context be a cheap shot? I don’t think it’s a t … more →

Tags: Education, great typo, Humor, Just plain wrong, Student Writing, Word choice, jabberwock, Lewis Carroll, orcs

"I use too many contraptions in my writing."4 comments

RAB wrote 4 months ago: Be not too quick to say “typo” to this one! A typo it may be, but the typist would have … more →

Tags: Education, great typo, Humor, inaccurate hearing, nostalgic, Student Writing, fountain pen, Palmer Method, Rube Goldberg

"One must go through the Despond of Slough."4 comments

RAB wrote 4 months ago: My student is writing about John Bunyan’s Pilgrim’s Progress, the story that has provide … more →

Tags: Education, Humor, inaccurate hearing, Literature, Student Writing, Pilgrim's Progress, John Bunyan, Sir John Betjeman, Slough

"He was not a cereal killer."8 comments

RAB wrote 7 months ago: I’m sure many of us who teach writing have seen this error, but it never ceases to amuse me. M … more →

Tags: Word choice, Student Writing, Humor

"They proceed to walk down the hill to a grassy null or open space."5 comments

RAB wrote 7 months ago: The “they” here is the procession with the Paul bearers. The procession is “procee … more →

Tags: Word choice, Student Writing, Education, Just plain wrong, Humor, Grassy Knoll, Alice in Wonderland

"Next in the procession are four Paul bearers carrying a coffin."5 comments

RAB wrote 7 months ago: I do hope Paul was in the coffin. What will my student do when someday he’s asked to be a pall … more →

Tags: Clear Thinking, Education, Humor, inaccurate hearing, Student Writing

"The media has influenced politics over the last 45 years."4 comments

RAB wrote 7 months ago: More history, courtesy of my students. First of all, yes, I am so old that I still consider the word … more →

Tags: Student Writing, Education, Yore, Humor, latin plural

"Birth is one of the greatest gifts we receive in life."4 comments

RAB wrote 8 months ago: I suppose this could pass muster for those who place the beginning of life at conception—or, in the … more →

Tags: Student Writing, Clear Thinking, Education, Humor

"Since the time of Jesus, when the only two known religions were Christianity and Judaism…"7 comments

RAB wrote 8 months ago: Here’s another student’s compulsive history sketch-in. Why do they insist on doing this? … more →

Tags: Student Writing, Education, Phrasing, Yore, Humor, Philosophical, In Which, Religion

"Whether the inhabitants of a mausoleum are living or dead, the property should be respected."3 comments

RAB wrote 9 months ago: Now, I have a friend and colleague who as an impoverished boy in Egypt did in fact live in a mausole … more →

Tags: Student Writing, Clear Thinking, Humor, tiffany windows

"He had the island of Cyprus in the tight grasp of his wrist…"3 comments

RAB wrote 10 months ago: How, oh how, to express the magnificence and power of Othello before Iago undermined it all and brou … more →

Tags: Word choice, Student Writing, Education, Figure of Speech, Purple Prose, Just plain wrong, Humor, othello, overwriting


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