Alison describes a punk concert in the basement of an Urbana house. This is an example of observational reporting. Alison reports with all of her senses and makes the reader feel as if he or she is th… more →
The ScoopSaint Know-All wrote 3 weeks ago: I’ve ranted about the “Show, don’t tell” rule a few times before, but this … more →
Adam Strasberg wrote 1 month ago: I mentioned this ad in the GM post as one of my all time favorites. It was made several years … more →
Adam Strasberg wrote 1 month ago: A friend sent me this ad late Friday. In between work and the weekend, I’ve been thinking … more →
pittsburghflashfictiongazette wrote 1 month ago: Are you a writer and the phrase “show don’t tell” is driving you crazy? You read … more →
Rebecca LuElla Miller wrote 2 months ago: Show, don’t tell. How many times does a writer hear that advice? And as a corollary, use the a … more →
jrn400 wrote 2 months ago: Alison describes a punk concert in the basement of an Urbana house. This is an example of observatio … more →
jrn400 wrote 2 months ago: Hope uses concrete details and action to describe her dad beautifully. In a few short sentences, the … more →
Merrilee wrote 2 months ago: An e-mail came through from one of the Australian writers mailing lists that I am on, from a newly p … more →
daybydaywriter wrote 3 months ago: Yesterday was my first day trying to formulate a query letter for my newly (nearly finished) polishe … more →
jrn400 wrote 4 months ago: Jen included concrete details in her story about food-borne illnesses that highlight the seriousness … more →
Joseph Lewis wrote 4 months ago: Sometimes, you just don’t like something. You don’t always know why, but then again, you … more →
jenniferlarsonwrites wrote 4 months ago: Yesterday, I interviewed two occupational therapists for a freelance story that I’m writing fo … more →
Courtney Vail wrote 4 months ago: This deep question posed by Hamlet is not merely about living or dying, it seeks to find the meaning … more →
jamesviscosi wrote 5 months ago: Well after the last couple of weeks of me being chatty about my checkered past in the horror field, … more →
pittsburghflashfictiongazette wrote 7 months ago: “Uncle Bobby,” Rachel said, “this is Jeff Hollister.” It was a hot, sunny Sa … more →
victanguera wrote 8 months ago: Everyone tells the aspiring writer “Show don’t tell.” Most of us muddle our way th … more →
Pat Bertram wrote 8 months ago: We are always told to show not tell, yet new writers often have a hard time understanding the differ … more →
MaryHelen wrote 8 months ago: As we think about Veteran’s Day, picture books can help children relate to historical events. … more →
beckycc wrote 8 months ago: And yet, I don’t feel victimized. Recently I submitted 250 tension-filled words from my work-i … more →