*Sorry, I couldn’t resist.*
But in all seriousness, edits are hard. Really hard. And they’re taking forever. At least, it seems that way.
In addition to the usual continuity issues and plot holes that need to be filled in any first draft, and the general word-smithing that must happen before I feel good about the work, I’ve had to completely rewrite several scenes in SANYARE to change points of view and add tension. 176 more words