Answer by Terry Drinkwater:
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I see a lot of SAT vocabulary here, a lot of flowery description of the cinema. Something's missing, though: I don't see much of you anywhere in the essay.
Answer by Parke Muth:
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Strange elongated sounds, an auditory slow motion whooshing. “This is the end, my only friend.” The chopper blades blend, morph into the fan spinning above the man’s face, upside down, eyes staring, empty and scared, at us.
Maeve is 19, bright, hard-working, and broke. She’s been self-supporting for the last two years (to document this, she has receipts for rent and utility payments, as well as her tax records). 823 more words