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Editing Tip #128 - Pay Close Attention to What Your Body Parts Are Doing

“Her eyes darted left and right.”

“His fingertips fell to the table.”

“Their arms dropped.”

You might not see it (heaven knows I miss it in my own work more than I care to admit) but the body parts in the sentences above are not behaving… 214 more words


Periwinkle Streetlights

Covered in a black hood, came the shadowy figure,
Her features were hidden,
Beneath the radiant glow of passion.
Her voice spoke in a musical mood, 215 more words