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"The time periods of my pieces are between 1630-1685…"

Well, right off the bat we have two problems.

My student was introducing her Early American Literature “confluences” paper, for which students were to choose from the syllabus five works written within a span of 50 years and then use them to develop a sense of the intellectual, cultural, or philosophical life of that time. 605 more words

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"The soil will become intoxicated by all the chemicals that they use to build the buildings."

This sentence comes from an essay discussing a plan by the city of New Haven to convert a strip of land used by a co-op farm into a combination of mall stores and “clean manufacturing.” My student was considering a compromise proposal whereby the farm would occupy a smaller part of the strip and the development would be built around it. 555 more words

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"Horses were not always house pets."

This sits alone in a margin of an old gradebook. I have no context for it, although another Horror a few pages later does mention a character in… 331 more words

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"You see this fear in the past, present, and future around the world."

My student was attributing the Salem Witch Trials of 1692-93 to a fear of the unknown, and certainly that’s a reasonable hypothesis. Then he goes on to remark that this fear was not limited to the people of Salem, or to the seventeenth century: “you see this fear in the past, present….” Again, he’s right about that: indeed, one might even speculate that many of those folks who made such bizarre choices at the ballot boxes last Tuesday were gripped by a fear of the unknown, the different, the alien. 395 more words

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"The piece started out with the line 'I hate and love.' …

My student was writing about a poem by Catullus, and he’s right: that’s how it started out. It’s quite similar to a poignant poem fragment by Sappho. 509 more words

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"Walt Whitman wrote 'Leaves of Grass,' which was…"

I think this is going to be another one of those sentences that begin all right, go on all right, and then go on a little too far and become ridiculous. 501 more words

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