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"The soil will become intoxicated by all the chemicals that they use to build the buildings."

This sentence comes from an essay discussing a plan by the city of New Haven to convert a strip of land used by a co-op farm into a combination of mall stores and “clean manufacturing.” My student was considering a compromise proposal whereby the farm would occupy a smaller part of the strip and the development would be built around it. 555 more words

Student Writing

"Horses were not always house pets."

This sits alone in a margin of an old gradebook. I have no context for it, although another Horror a few pages later does mention a character in… 331 more words

Student Writing

"You see this fear in the past, present, and future around the world."

My student was attributing the Salem Witch Trials of 1692-93 to a fear of the unknown, and certainly that’s a reasonable hypothesis. Then he goes on to remark that this fear was not limited to the people of Salem, or to the seventeenth century: “you see this fear in the past, present….” Again, he’s right about that: indeed, one might even speculate that many of those folks who made such bizarre choices at the ballot boxes last Tuesday were gripped by a fear of the unknown, the different, the alien. 395 more words

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"The piece started out with the line 'I hate and love.' …

My student was writing about a poem by Catullus, and he’s right: that’s how it started out. It’s quite similar to a poignant poem fragment by Sappho. 509 more words

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