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Path of My Heart

So worried about tomorrow
Yet I haven’t even gotten through today
Maybe I’d know which way to go
If someone showed me the way

Looking for answers to questions… 154 more words



Revised.  Originally posted 6/10/2012.

Hair, sifted full of gray.
Cut, less than good.
The scalp’s not flaking
with the new shampoo.

starting to furrow, starting to line, 586 more words


Wednesday Workshop: Editing Plus

Editing Plus
Wednesday Workshop
14 March 2018

We all need a second pair of eyes whether we are editing our own work or when we edit the work of others.  681 more words

Class, Tues, 3/13


  1. I’d like to continue working with the same people as last week
  2. I’d like to work with different people
  3. I don’t have strong feelings about this issue…
  4. 136 more words

What a Difference a Book Makes

I’ve just wrapped up the first round of revisions/rewrites on The End of the (Werewolf) Curse and I’m feeling pretty pleased with myself. I think I might need only one more round of light revisions, and then I can polish it up. 397 more words


How to be organized and productive to study

Few years ago, I was such an unproductive and unmotivated student. On top of that, I was also a procrastinator. That being said I always… 872 more words


I Wake Up In Despair

Revision.  Posted originally in April, 2016.

I wake up in despair most mornings.
Each day slants uphill.
It takes everything I have to climb it. 339 more words