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Third Round of Revisions Done

Second or third pass, depending on how you count. At any rate, I’ve reached the point where continuing to fuss with the WAR OF MAGIC manuscript right now is more likely to do harm than good. 43 more words


Non, Je Ne Regrette Rien

Originally posted 4/27/2013.

I turned around 
at the end of a long corridor
to seek contemporaries. 
Found a few.

Craned my neck
to find peers.  94 more words


The sequel to Kimball's Kiss: part two

The sequel to Kimballs Kiss -Sophie Walker_part two

I have now finished revising the second part of the sequel to Kimball’s Kiss, originally entitled… 69 more words


Polytheist's Lament

Originally posted 6/8/2013.

67,000 perfectly lovely
gods out there,
67,000 facets to the diamond
of God-Being,

yet here is one facet that insists the light’s… 227 more words


Big Joe Turner

Originally posted 6/13/2012.

Big Joe Turner

could palm a jump blues
like an egg,
handle it rough,
never break it. 

“Shake Rattle And Roll.”
Big Joe Long Dead smiting us… 89 more words


Some things you just can’t let go


This is the story of a story. I don’t know how it ends.

In 2012 I had a miscarriage. The one shining knowledge that had come out of that dark experience was that whatever else happened in my life, I wanted to write. 1,044 more words


Second Pass Revisions

I finished the first pass of revisions on War of Magic.

I moved a chapter and added/revised a little around it to tie it in better to the rest of the story. 62 more words