The irony is that he thought by making things worse in America he would win favor with the rest of the world. His true accomplishment is that he has made the world worse and America worse. 49 more words
2 months, 2 weeks ago
Licking Honey Off of Thorns
If Rosenberg couldn’t remember the basic tenet of writing (“Show, don’t tell”) he could at least have listened to Madonna (“Papa, Don’t Preach”).
Pity. There’s a good story buried between the “preaching” and “telling.”
–Pastor Ward Clinton
2 months, 3 weeks ago
Too much preaching; not enough story.
Clunky, ham-handed; some interesting characters and plotlines buried under clunky writing, preaching and far too much self-justifying expository prose.
And the angel of the Lord said to Hagar, “Behold, you are pregnant and shall bear a son. You shall call his name Ishmael, because the Lord has listened to your affliction. 586 more words
8 months, 2 weeks ago